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JP826
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Me!! All about ME!
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One more for my memo--- I promise!
There is a fear that if we do participate in the process, we will pay a much higher percentage of claims than we can collect on.
OR
There is a fear that if we do participate in the process, THAT we will pay a much higher percentage of claims than we can collect on.
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MrsFlatbread
Skinny jeans are in my future
Member since 6/06 10258 total posts
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Baby Momma
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:20 PM |
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itkocak
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Message edited 11/11/2011 8:49:02 PM.
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:20 PM |
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JP826
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Member since 9/06 10903 total posts
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Me!! All about ME!
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Posted by MrsFlatbread
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so no "that", right??
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:21 PM |
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eroxgirl
My Loves
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Rebecca
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
the first one.
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:21 PM |
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MrsFlatbread
Skinny jeans are in my future
Member since 6/06 10258 total posts
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Baby Momma
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Posted by imthekevinofcindyandkevin
this:
There is a fear, if we do participate in the process, THAT we will pay a much higher percentage of claims than we can collect on.
this is fine too
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:22 PM |
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MrsFlatbread
Skinny jeans are in my future
Member since 6/06 10258 total posts
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Baby Momma
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Posted by SIBride06
Posted by MrsFlatbread
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so no "that", right??
not the second one
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:23 PM |
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neener1211
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J
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
use the first one....don't use THAT
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:24 PM |
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itkocak
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Message edited 11/11/2011 8:49:22 PM.
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:24 PM |
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bird382
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Just to be annoying ( ), I prefer:
"If we do participate in the process, there is a fear that we will pay..."
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:26 PM |
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MrsFlatbread
Skinny jeans are in my future
Member since 6/06 10258 total posts
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Baby Momma
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Posted by bird382
Just to be annoying (), I prefer:
"If we do participate in the process, there is a fear that we will pay..."
this is fine...i think i like it better
Message edited 10/2/2007 4:28:25 PM.
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:27 PM |
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itkocak
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Message edited 11/11/2011 8:49:42 PM.
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:29 PM |
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Smiles111
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Posted by bird382
Just to be annoying (), I prefer:
"If we do participate in the process, there is a fear that we will pay..."
This way seems clearer.
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| Posted 10/2/07 4:46 PM |
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Niblet
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Member since 5/07 922 total posts
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Cher
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
Posted by bird382
Just to be annoying (), I prefer:
"If we do participate in the process, there is a fear that we will pay..."
This is clear and concise; it is the best choice.
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| Posted 10/2/07 5:04 PM |
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BlondeJD
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Me!!!
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Re: One more for my memo--- I promise!
I would set it up as an "if...then..." proposition:
"If we do participate in the process, there is a fear that we will pay a much higher percentage of claims than we can collect on."
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| Posted 10/2/07 5:07 PM |
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