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Quick invite wording help needed please!!- edited with correction

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nbc188
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Quick invite wording help needed please!!- edited with correction

The first line of the invite...can't figure out which is right or better. The words wouldn't be capitalized, obviously...

Please join us FOR
DD's first birthday party

-or-

Please join us AT
DD's first birthday party

-or- should I put
Please join us as we celebrate at
DD's first birthday party

Thanks!!

Message edited 4/23/2008 11:17:05 PM.

Posted 4/23/08 11:07 PM
 
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Marcie
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Re: Quick invite wording help needed please!!

For

Posted 4/23/08 11:09 PM
 

nadia
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Re: Quick invite wording help needed please!!

Please join us as we celebrate DD's first birthday party

or use for

Posted 4/23/08 11:10 PM
 

nrthshgrl
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Re: Quick invite wording help needed please!!

Posted by Marcie

For



Ditto

I would say

Please join us to celebrate
DD's 1st Birthday.

Message edited 4/23/2008 11:12:44 PM.

Posted 4/23/08 11:12 PM
 

nbc188
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Re: Quick invite wording help needed please!!- edited with correction

I didn't write it properly...duh!

This is what it says fully--

Please join us for
DD's First Ever Birthday Party!

-or-
Please join us at
DD's First Ever Birthday Party!

-or-
Please join us as we celebrate at
DD's First Ever Birthday Party!


-or-
any other suggestions Chat Icon

Message edited 4/23/2008 11:15:59 PM.

Posted 4/23/08 11:15 PM
 

Marcie
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Re: Quick invite wording help needed please!!- edited with correction

For my DD it read

First smile, first laugh
first tooth, first birthday

Join us in celebrating
Alison's Special day...

Please join us on June 9th, 2007
to celebrate Alison (last name)
as she turns 1 year old

HTH Chat Icon

Posted 4/23/08 11:19 PM
 

nbc188
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Re: Quick invite wording help needed please!!- edited with correction

Thanks everyone. All done! Chat Icon

Posted 4/23/08 11:36 PM
 
 

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