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I made a new poem up it's called forgiveness please tell me if its good
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luvsbob4603
To a healthy 2013
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I made a new poem up it's called forgiveness please tell me if its good
I want your honest opinions i was playing around with this poem and i would like your honest opinions thanks.. Here it goes
Forgiveness
Forgivess is a peace of mind
even when you think it's not worth the time
forgiveness is something we all need
especiallywhen it's hard to see
even when someone breaks your trust apart
forgiveness is what is in the heart
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Posted 3/26/07 11:21 PM  |
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Re: I made a new poem up it's called forgiveness please tell me if its good
I love it!
Just Beautiful Ro
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| Posted 3/26/07 11:23 PM |
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luvsbob4603
To a healthy 2013
Member since 5/05 21840 total posts
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To a brand new year to a healthier me
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Re: I made a new poem up it's called forgiveness please tell me if its good
Thank you!!!!
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| Posted 3/26/07 11:24 PM |
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