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ndblovah
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Wording help
This just doesn't sound right to me, suggestions please....
I have, " please join us as we celebrate love and new life in the dedication in our son to God"
then our Ds name and the event details etc...
Should I put our names on the invite some where? Does that sound right? Only close family are being invited....
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Mariabella
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Re: Wording help
Your name & DH's name joyfully invite you to celebrate love and new life in the dedication of our son (NAME) to God.
Then the date, time, etc.
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| Posted 4/3/13 3:10 PM |
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ndblovah
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Re: Wording help
Posted by Mariabella
Your name & DH's name joyfully invite you to celebrate love and new life in the dedication of our son (NAME) to God.
Then the date, time, etc.
Thank you. I love that, the only issue is that his name is in larger, fancier font after the sentence. If I was to seperate the wording and have "to God' under it, it would look very weird... hmmm...
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| Posted 4/3/13 3:28 PM |
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nraboni
Uggh...
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Nicole
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Re: Wording help
Posted by kokopelia
Posted by Mariabella
Your name & DH's name joyfully invite you to celebrate love and new life in the dedication of our son (NAME) to God.
Then the date, time, etc.
Thank you. I love that, the only issue is that his name is in larger, fancier font after the sentence. If I was to seperate the wording and have "to God' under it, it would look very weird... hmmm...
Just put his name under the paragraph.
Your name & DH's name joyfully invite you to celebrate love and new life in the dedication of our son to God.
DS Name
Then the date, time, etc.
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| Posted 4/3/13 3:31 PM |
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ndblovah
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Re: Wording help
Posted by nraboni
Posted by kokopelia
Posted by Mariabella
Your name & DH's name joyfully invite you to celebrate love and new life in the dedication of our son (NAME) to God.
Then the date, time, etc.
Thank you. I love that, the only issue is that his name is in larger, fancier font after the sentence. If I was to seperate the wording and have "to God' under it, it would look very weird... hmmm...
Just put his name under the paragraph.
Your name & DH's name joyfully invite you to celebrate love and new life in the dedication of our son to God.
DS Name
Then the date, time, etc.
Perfect ! That's what I did too. Thank you !!
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| Posted 4/3/13 3:34 PM |
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