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lullabella
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Grammer Help Please!!
Does this make sense?
You are a beautiful person who has set the example for those around you of how to live with grace, integrity and strength during the happiest and saddest times in life. Someday, I hope to lead from your example and inspire those around me.
Message edited 8/21/2007 10:38:45 PM.
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Posted 8/21/07 10:34 PM  |
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Goldi0218
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Leslie
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Re: Grammer Help Please!!
The proper grammar for that sentence would/could be:
Someday, I hope to lead from your example and inspire those around me.
Message edited 8/21/2007 10:37:33 PM.
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| Posted 8/21/07 10:37 PM |
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lullabella
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Re: Grammer Help Please!!
Posted by Goldi0218
The proper grammar for that sentence would/could be:
Someday, I hope to lead from your example and inspire those around me.
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THANK YOU! I just updated it again. I know what I want to say just not good with getting it on paper!
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| Posted 8/21/07 10:39 PM |
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luckyinlove
I love my baby girls!
Member since 12/06 2441 total posts
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Lauren
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Re: Grammer Help Please!!
Posted by lullabella
Does this make sense?
You are a beautiful person who has set the example for those around you of how to live with grace, integrity and strength during the happiest and saddest times in life. Someday, I hope to lead from your example and inspire those around me.
It should be:
You are a beautiful person who has set the example for those around you for how to live with grace...
Also, "lead from your example" sounds like it doesn't flow. Maybe--- Someday I hope to use your example to be a leader and inspire those around me.
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| Posted 8/21/07 11:25 PM |
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