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bellarina
She's my dancing queen!
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need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
HI!
I've been gone for a very long time. Going through a very messy divorce. I am not one to be a poet by all means, but I just wanted to share this with you. Laugh, cry, vomit after reading this if you like, just started pouring my heart out as a way of therapy. Just wanted to send this out to help me through the fight of my life. I do not and will not go into details of my case, but here's my heart if you will:
Metamorphasias
I fell for you
Sweet man
smooth talker
I fell for you
Good looking
Good job
I fell for you
At the beach, a nice kiss
I imagined our life as bliss
I fell for you
A proposal
A dream
I fell for you
A marriage
A house
I fell for you
White picket fence
Red door
I fell for you
A dog
A daughter
I fell for you
Kisses, hugs, secrets told
I fell for you
Trying my best to make it right
All those fights
I fell for you
Gardens, trips planned but not taken
Nights you're gone playing
I fell for you
Counseling, dedication
Getting worse but not giving up
I fell for you
Kind words in cards
I fell for you
Voices rising
Order of protection
Harassment, scared
I fell for you
Daughter scared
Daughter scarred
I fell for you
Court dates
Too late to make right
I fell for you
LIAR!!!
My love is gone
I no longer feel for you.
Hatred growing
Little girl left unknowing
House vacant
Home destroyed
Lives torn apart with lies
Trust gone
Love scarred
Girl’s innocence gone
Wondering why
Who to trust
Who to blame
Wondering what she did wrong
The scars growing deeper
They will never be gone
Angry words need to be replaced
Strong smiles upon my face
No more tears
Need to make it right
Stand strong for love is gone
Little girl injured
In a battle not her own
Fault lies within her father
Too selfish and uncaring
One day she will see the truth
Husband, father and a liar
Not worthy of my time
Not worthy of my love or caring
Feelings of hatred and betrayment now replace
The love that once shown upon my face
The metamorphosis of love to lies
Is unfortunate in it’s demise.
Message edited 7/19/2008 7:45:48 PM.
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monkeybride
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
I'm so sorry. That is a really powerful poem that you wrote.
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yankinmanc
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
I hope it helps to get that all out! Its quite powerful.
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MrsBumbleb
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
stay stong
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Faithx2
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
Oh Lora I am so sorry you are going through this
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| Posted 7/4/08 5:36 AM |
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Calla
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
Your poem is really moving. I hope it helps you to pour out the emotions...
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| Posted 7/4/08 6:06 AM |
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ME75
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
your poem says a lot...i am so sorry you are going through something so painful. many to you!
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| Posted 7/4/08 6:56 AM |
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05mommy09
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AugustMommy
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
I'm soo sorry u are going through this...your poem made me cry Try to stay strong...im sure it's not easy
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| Posted 7/4/08 7:03 AM |
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SweetCin
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
I'm so sorry you're going through this...your poem is very powerful
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| Posted 7/4/08 7:04 AM |
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bellarina
She's my dancing queen!
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
thanks everyone! happy 4th! it was very theraputic.
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rojerono
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Matteos-mommy
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MrsR
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
I am so sorry you are going through a rough time.
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| Posted 7/4/08 8:16 AM |
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Lucky
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
I can tell you are a strong woman and you will make it through this!!!
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dooodles
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
I am so sorry that you are going through such a trying time. Those words really do say a lot without saying much. I hope just writing them and getting it out helped some
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justthe4ofus
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Melbernai
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waterspout4
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Moehick
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
Your poem is very powerful, stay strong and show your daughter just how a woman can handle all.
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Kelly9904
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
Your words are very powerful, you can feel the passion you are feeling behind them
Message edited 7/4/2008 9:10:40 AM.
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tabrtm
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
What a wonderful poem.
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| Posted 7/4/08 9:09 AM |
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beachgirl
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
 hang in there and cherish your beautiful daughter.
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Marcie
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Re: need opinions.... going through majorly tough time
I am so sorry you are going through this
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